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Chapter 1:

The meeting and the psychotist: Hyperactive condolences
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Akaya´s point of view:

I sat in the car next to my father, who is called Kenji. He had decided to take me to boarding school today, "unfortunately". He raved about me the whole time while I was driving. Yes, exactly "his oh so clever daughter", who was so good to be sent to boarding school, the same sentence for the thousandth time, you can annoy him! But I let it go this time, because now I wouldn't see my family for the time being. Nevertheless, I was happy to have my parents' peace and quiet soon, not to forget my annoying little brother! I mean he howls when I don't want to play with him - it's no wonder if he behaves like that. Most of the time I drove in the car, I only half listened to my father, more of a lost in thought. I still did not understand it like a brother and my parents always managed to rob me of the last nerve. Finally my father stopped in front of a large building, and I immediately realized that we had arrived at the boarding school. I opened the car door and already heard my father: "Are you quite sure that you want to go in alone?" I was silent for the moment and nodded silently. My father said: "Ok, don't forget to call, so we know that you are still alive." And I just nodded again. I quickly got my 2 trolley suitcases out of the trunk and closed it.
I heard the engine behind me and knew the noise suggested that my father was gone. As I gathered my courage and approached the open boarding school gate, I noticed that the boarding school consisted of several buildings. Behind me I heard a noise similar to a braking bus and looked back and lo and behold, I wasn't that wrong with the braking bus. However, the bus was empty, only one person got off the bus. It was a girl with a blonde, wavy, pigtail, 2 thick strands that fell over her shoulder and with beautiful turquoise-colored striking eyes, in addition to that she was quite small, I suspected about 2 heads smaller than me, hers Figure looked pretty normal. She stepped off the bus and looked at me with wide eyes.

Emi's point of view:

I spent 2 hours packing my suitcase. I had forgotten that today is the day I had to go to boarding school because the new year started and I had registered for this year. A few days ago my parents offered me a ride to boarding school, but I refused and asked if I could take a private bus. They put the money on the table for me today and so we were silent day after day. That's because I don't feel connected to them and it's the other way around. When I looked out of the window I saw my girlfriend, she apparently wanted to say goodbye. Because after I went to boarding school we could hardly see each other. I took my too much luggage and ran downstairs. "Bye!" was the only thing I screamed before I left the house and the wooden door fell into the frame, but nothing came back. It was over, I turned my back on this house and these parents. I ran to my friend, she was part of my family, I spent most of my time with her and hugged her one last time. I didn't know when I could go back to Kyoto, but it will be explained in the boarding school.She returned my hug "Call me, will you?" she asked, then pushed me away and smiled at me.
I nodded and couldn't help hugging her again. At that very moment my bus stopped. My best friend helped me carry too much luggage in. * Stop girl * the thought shot in my head I sat on the back seat in the back of the bus and waved to her until I could no longer see her. It took a while for the bus to stop in front of the boarding school in Tokyo. When I got out I saw a girl who was standing in front of the boarding school. She turned and I eyed her. She had brown hair in which a small but fine red sheen could be seen, her hair was loose and she had wonderful shining fawn-brown eyes which looked at me. She was quite a bit taller than me. When I looked over one of her shoulders, I saw the hilt of a sword. My breath caught and I rowed my arms up and down wildly. This picture reminded me of a horror movie. The last thing I hear is my scream, just like it should be in a horror movie. * OH MY GOD, save me from the psychotic aunt * I thought hysterically. The bus driver came with my luggage and put it on the floor. He looked at me in amazement, got back on the bus and drove off. * No, my rescue runs away from the psychotic aunt, that ass of the bus driver, if I get out of here alive then I swear, yes, I'll send a hit man for you! *

Yuki's point of view

I was on the train going to Tokyo, my first year of boarding school was supposed to start today. Of course, I was really looking forward to it, because for fear of burdening my family I voluntarily moved there and wanted to become self-employed. And since we are neither poor nor rich, I wanted to decide for myself where my life would go. When the train announcement sounded that we had arrived in Tokyo, I got off, I asked people for directions and a little bit before the boarding school I checked my hairstyle in a shop window, since I slept on the train, the risk was of course also over quite a bit taller to have a messy hairstyle. As expected, the hair is pretty messy, so I put my bag down, dug out my brush and straightened my hair again. I looked at myself again in the mirror and saw a girl with blue and black hair, which is adorned with a white hair band. Beautiful blue eyes with a small shade of purple peeked out from under her pony.
She was slim and of a normal height for her age, the girl nodded contentedly and turned away from the window. I looked around and saw a man, I ran up to him and asked him for directions. And since it is a popular boarding school, a Japanese was able to describe the way for me. My way led me around many corners until I finally stood in front of a wall, then I heard a scream of fear, which of course I followed - and not slowly and saw a frightened blond-haired girl. I quickly ran to her and shook her a little, she was still staring a little shocked and afraid and I followed her gaze. She stared at a brown haired girl. "What's going on here?!" I asked her. "I don't know, she looked at me and then she just screamed." the brown-haired woman answers my question. Then I noticed how the blonde lifted her finger and pointed over her left shoulder. When my gaze wandered to her shoulder, I saw the sword that she is carrying on her back. "I think she's afraid of your sword." I said to her. The brown-haired woman took the sword from her back. "Oh that, this is not a sword but a katana I only have that with me because I don't want to part with my katana.So you don't need to be afraid. I won't do you any harm, "she said and put it back into the vagina.

General view:

Emi breathed in and out deeply after these words and calmed down. "Well then it's good, actually I knew that all along." said Emi and everyone stared at her stupidly. "Who are you actually?" Yuki questions. "Well, I'm Emi Gusoto and I'm 15 years old, I'm from Kyoto." Emi finished, then both stared at Akaya. "Hmm ... I'm Akaya Sutariba and I am 18 years old. I live in Osaka," Akaya said. Now only Yuki remained: "I'm Yuki Yamamoto and 16 years old, I live in Yokohama." she answers at the end.

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Many thanks to Mimi and Kira for their characters

and thanks again to Kira for the correction

thank you for reading and see you in the next chapter Chu

Chapter 1: published on http://www.fanfiktion.de/s/54b7099500046c3c32f4e451/1/Das-Internat-und-die-3-Neue-Schuelerinnen