Hello!
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Here is my first FF that I wrote for you. I hope you like it because I've really tried.
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The story begins in Volume 28 when the Namek planet was destroyed and Bulma offered them a place to stay for the coming months.
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Yeah, and now enough talked. ^ - ^ Here comes my story. I wish you a lot of fun!
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Vegeta gave Bulma a venomous look. But Bulma no longer registered him.
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"I'm going to call my father now to pick us up." she said.
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The Namek nodded and waited patiently. After half an hour the jet came and Bulma happily waved to her father. Mr Briefs smiled happily at Bulma.
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"Well Bulma? How was your name circle?"
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"Well ....." she said "Let's get in at last. I'm really hungry."<br />
"Well, you're in a hurry." noted Mr. Briefs and opened the large aft hatch of the spacecraft. The jet plane was huge so that all Namek people could fit in. The Namek people admired the jet from all sides.
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"That's a technology!" said one of them and couldn't shut his mouth. Of course, the Namek people were now all excited to see what the plane would look like from the inside and got on quickly. Piccolo had a very large drop on his face. He was ashamed of his so ignorant conspecifics.
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When the Namekians were finally in the jet, their eyes got really big. "Wow! This is technology" they said as if from one mouth. They hadn’t even expected that planet earth had so much technology.
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"Tse!" said Vegeta with a wrinkled nose. He stood leaning against a wall with his arms crossed and watched the Namekians and especially Bulma. He liked her straight away. But Vegeta didn't want to admit it.When all the Namekians were gathered on the plane, Mr. Briefs shouted loudly: "BUCKLE IN EVERYTHING! WE ARE GOING ON NOW!". The big hatch closed and every Namek looked for a nice place to sit. Most want to sit by the window. (Where else?) Because there was the most beautiful view.
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"The earth is a wonderful planet." said Muhli. "Our planet used to be so beautiful too." and Muhli bowed his head. Then the name of his neighbor put his hand on his lap and gave him a friendly smile. "Never mind. We have the Dragon Balls after all." said this. Muhlie slowly raised his head and smiled back. "You're right! And in the meantime we're going to plant a few trees on the ground. Just look at those bare spots!" complained Muhli. "That looks terrible."
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Suddenly the jet took off. Dust swirled up and Piccolo waved to his relatives.
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Vegeta was still standing in the corner.He didn't have to look out the window at all. This only reminded him of his last defeat. Vegeta bit his lip hard in anger, causing them to bleed. Vegeta raised his clenched fist and wiped the blood away.
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