Fighting Arts
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Well, as I think I already mentioned, I'm drawing a manga called Fighting Arts with a friend (that is, he also wrote something: "Cold". But nobody commented on that). The main characters are Ryo and Amy.
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To be clear, the story came up with me but I invented the characters and advised him. Here's a little who's who:
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Ryo Bondiko: Everyone who has read my FF: Crossover: Videl meets Ryo knows him.
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He has blue hair and brown eyes. He is an excellent martial artist.
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He's pretty cool most of the time, but he can also get really pissed off.
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Mister Bondiko: Ryo's father. He looks pretty old, kind of like Happosai, but he's not that perverted. But he has some serious problems: he lisps (says L instead of R), he is blind as a mole (thinks Amy is a man) and is hard of hearing (wait and see).
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Amy Shigeru: She has meadow green hair and mysterious blue eyes.She is impulsive and a little clumsy at times. She really wants to be accepted into the Fighting Club. Let's see if it works out ...
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Mister Shigeru: Amy's father. He seems to be planning something secret with Bondiko, but I'm not going to reveal that yet. He has black hair (actually a minority in Manga 's) and a mustache. He also owns the house.
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Yinto: He's the typical villain, nasty, brutal and doesn't shy away from using tricks in his fights. He likes to hit weaker people. He is bald and is the leader and best fighter of the fighting club.
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So now comes the story, anyway, the first part.
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1) A city near Hokkaido. More precisely a campsite:
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A boy's voice can be heard from one of the caravans: "I beg your pardon? To Tokyo? Why is that, father?" - "My old Fleund Shigelu has invited us. We should stay a while." so you can't read just swap the L's for R's)."But father, I am training here right now and ..." - "No" abel "you can continue tlainielren, he has a great Galten and there is an old dojo nearby that you can use." - "Well then we go Well, at least something else. Tokyo, huh? I haven't been there yet, it's definitely worth a detour. "-" Pack your things in two hours, it'll start. "
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--------- Tokyo - The Fighting Club building -----------
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On the door it says: Today admission exams for new members.
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"(cough) Is that (cough) all you have to offer Yinto? (cough)" - "Oh no, I haven't even started yet." Yinto laughs dirty.
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Amy and Yinto stand opposite each other in a ring, both of them holding Bo wands in their hands. Amy looks pretty exhausted, she can barely stand on her feet.
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Yinto, on the other hand, seems very relaxed. "Take care Shigeru, now I'll show you a great trick." Yinto took a step forward and before Amy could even blink he knocked the Bo out of her hand and caught him.Amy no longer knew what was happening to her from all sides the Bo 's seemed to hit her, she held her hands in front of her face. The pain and humiliation were so great that a small tear rolled out of her eye. It fell on the ring floor. Amy gritted her teeth, she wanted at least one hit. With all the anger she had in her, she flung her leg up towards Yinto 's face. However, he caught her foot loosely with one hand and then grabbed Amy's leg. He tossed her around a little and then let her go. Amy screamed she flew against the wall. At the last second she had put her arm in front of her head. *Crack*
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Her hand was broken from hitting the wall. Yinto stood triumphantly at the edge of the ring: "Look, Shigeru, you are just a little girl who is not suitable for fighting." Again he laughed dirty and Amy didn't know what hurt anymore: her hand or the fact that the whole fighting Club laughed at her.She slowly shuffled into the locker room, then showered and changed. Her hand hurt terribly, she made a makeshift bandage out of a piece of cloth from her T-shirt. There weren't any bandages here. A club for "tough guys" so you don't care about a broken hand. Amy pulled herself up and then slowly shuffled home….
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2)
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Ryo sat on a cushion in the trailer, watching his father drive the car. Then something else caught his attention, it was a street sign:
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* Tokyo 2000km * (If that's wrong: Sorry !! I'm not that familiar with Japan)
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"Phew at least another 20 hours." ...
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----- An alley that leads to the Shigeru 's house ----------
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“He beat me like a beginner.” Amy still shuffled listlessly towards her house. “I would have loved to have been accepted into the Fighting Club.” She gritted her teeth tightly. "Grr as true as my name is Amy Shigeru, I will never be defeated again !!!!!!"She clenched her fists tightly." I will train like never before, I will be stronger than Rocky, Tyson and Stefan Raab together! And above all better than ... this ... Yinto. AUUUUUAA! "Only now did she notice that she had clenched her broken hand. Tears welled out of her eyes and she held the aching hand.
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"I'm so stupid !! Ouch !!" She quickly ran all the way home.
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"Dad, I'm back!" Mister Shigeru came out of the living room. "Oh my dear daughter, it's nice that you're here." He hugged his daughter, he always did that when she came home. Amy hated that. He accidentally pinched her hand as well.
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"AUAAAA! Let go !!" - "What do you have daughter?"
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- "Broke my hand in the fight!"
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- "Oh? No problem, I'll get the Shigeru mint oil."
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(Shigeru Mint Oil: A liquid made from Japanese mint oil and a secret agent. Heals pretty much anything from a sprain to a break.But can't compete with the Senzu beans)
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He quickly ran to the bathroom and got the small bottle. Then he dripped something on Amy's hand. "So that should be healed in half an hour." - "Thanks Dad, I'm going to my room now." Amy went up the stairs and then disappeared behind the door of her room.
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Mister Shigeru was still standing downstairs: "Shall I tell her? Oh, what she will see for herself tomorrow."
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---- Half an hour later ---------
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Amy held her hand in front of her face, moving her fingers and making a fist. “Cool dad was right about everything.” She crawled under her bed and pulled out some very heavy dumbbells. Amy lifted her a few times, but then she let one of the two fall right on her foot. "Au Au Au !! Man always me !!" She hopped through the room ...
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------ The next day -------------
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Amy was on her way home from school.
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"Man, yesterday's training was really nothing, I should finally stop fooling myself, I'll never beat Yinto."She was now on the last bend in front of her house." What the ...? "She looked in the direction of the house and stared at the silver-gray trailer that was standing in front of her door. She ran quickly to her front door and yanked it open." Dad have a visitor? "Shigeru came back out of the living room and hugged his daughter." Yes, daughter, we actually have visitors. Hehe. " -"Who then? "-" Oh you will like it, it's a nice boy and solo too! "-" Oh ... eh ... I'm curious ... ehm. "She walked slowly towards the door of the living room ... ..
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So that was the first part of my new story, I wrote it to tell you a little bit about the background of Ryo.
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I hope you like it. Write a couple of pick-ups.
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Ryo
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