Thank you for your comments, and thank you for giving me your honest opinion. On comment one: Subject: "Stop surreptitious advertising!" I can only say: I just want you to read my girlfriend's story too, you would miss something if you didn't do that. In addition, you don't have to read my surreptitious advertising * scold *, no, ... just don't be angry. That was your opinion, and mine is ok .....
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Comment 2: Topic: "Find Part 4 Kitschy" ... well, I wanted to write something "abnormal" from the start, with elements or something like that. Originally I even wanted to call the Storry "The Group Z and the 5 Elements" (..but then I decided differently) I have to admit, it's really not that special ... I can't think of the word, but you know sure what i mean, but what the heck. ARTIST'S FREEDOM !!! (... I find such things a little harder to write. Love scenes, or I like them much better ... how do you see that? ...)<br />
To come 3: Topic: "Keep writing quickly" .... YOUR WISH SHOULD BE FULFILLED!
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Son Gohan had walked next to Elane the whole time and now nobody really knew where they were. The sky had already turned red-orange because it was already sunset. Gohan stopped and looked around. They were just before the abyss of the beautiful waterfall, which you could admire so well from below. A few meters further ahead, so pretty close to the edge, where the view over the valley and the heavenly sunset was the most beautiful, Elane stopped with her back to Son Gohan. Her dress and hair billowed and curled in the wind. It was a beautiful sight. At first Elane stood there prouder than a king: "Son Gohan! ... You can feel the wind. It is so refreshingly cool and yet it hugs my skin so wonderfully warm. Do you know the feeling? ..... But who knows how long this continues."And suddenly you heard a little sob and Elane didn't stand there so gracefully anymore. Gohan took his jacket and walked up to Elane. He knew the feeling of losing someone. He too had once lost a family member.
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Gohan touched Elane's cold shoulders, who then startled a little. He put his jacket around Elane's shoulders and gently stroked her arms. Elane enjoyed this tender touch from Son Gohan. He carefully turned Elane around. She didn't look into his eyes, but rather shyly at his chest. Son Gohan lifted Elane's head so high that they were now looking each other straight in the eye. Gohan gently wiped away her tears with his index finger. He stroked her cheek until he reached her chin. There he stopped and whispered to her: "" I will help you to reunite your family. I'll do everything in my power to see you happy again. "She literally jumped on his neck and hugged him overjoyed.When they stood neck to neck and Elane pulled her head back a little, they looked deep into each other's eyes. Suddenly, as if by themselves, their lips came closer and closer, and they began to close their eyes and .....
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"Elane! Where have you been for so long! We're already worried!" screeched a voice that was almost too hysterical. It was Hilda. She hurried to Elane, took her hand and pulled her away from Son Gohan. Gohan and Elane were more than embarrassed by the whole situation. Elane was pulled a few meters further by Hilda and now Hilda whispered to Elane: "Princess! There is no time for other interests now. You can only think about the fight with Dagor! Do not forget ... The future of the universe lies in your hands ..... this earthling is only of use to you if he helps you in the fight. ". As if dazed, Elane replied "... Yes, dear nurse. You are right. I let myself go too much."
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Now the three went back into the house, where Chichi was already waiting.<br />
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"So, Son Gohan. Where have you been so long! We were already worried." Chichi scolded when the three finally came home. It was already dark. Chichi looked at Elane, who looked down on the floor, but Chichi felt that something had happened between Elane and her son and that Elane, Gohan's jacket was hanging around her shoulders, she didn't like at all. > Son Gohan..you do have a girlfriend or ... so if that goes well? Better not promise yourself too much from this Elane. After all, after you've chased this villain away (... as if it was already clear whether you could defeat this "villain" ... Ts ...), she will have to go back to her planet.
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After Chichi had carefully examined the young princess again. she turned to Hilda again in a friendly mood. "If you want you can stay with us, or be our guests until you have settled this matter because of you here.", then back to Son Gohan:" You know, Hilda has already told me everything by now. "" We are happy to accept this offer. ", thanked Hilde for this offer." And, ... in which room will you sleep? "asked Gohan and secretly looked with a grin at Elane, who was still looking to the ground. However, she could feel Gohan's glances Chichi noticed this and spontaneously knew an answer: "Well, my friends, I won't make it that easy for you! It would be even nicer if a girl slept with you ... no, Son Gohan ... that's how it works." not ... <"Well, I thought that the 2 could have my bedroom. There is a double bed there, so you have enough space. I'll be with Son ... "Chichi noticed how shocked she was suddenly looked at by Son Gohan. She knew that it would be quite embarrassing for Son Gohan if she slept in his room, and since Chichi just didn't want him is too much with Elane and didn't want her to make her son totally unhappy, she said quickly: "... stay at Son Goten's." " Oh yes! But then you have to tell me a story every evening, yes mum "shouted Son Goten excitedly, who had listened from the kitchen and now ran to his mother." Yes, I'll do that, my darling! "Said Chichi and stroked Son Goten over you hair. "
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Then everyone went into the kitchen to have another bite to eat.
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"... So ... now let's go to sleep, it's getting late.", Chichi said and went to bed with Son Gohan. Hilda also got up to go to sleep. “Are you coming with Elane?” “No, - but I'll be right there, I want to talk to Son Gohan for a moment.” Now only Son Gohan and Elane remained seated. They sat across from each other. Elane looked after Hilda, who was climbing the stairs. In the meantime, she has been carefully examined by Son Gohan> What does she want. Surely she wants to pick up where we left off earlier, 'he smiled all over the place. Elane noticed this and suddenly came very close to Son Gohan's face.Gohan:> YES! I knew it. <, but to his great disappointment Elane said coldly, and with a slightly angry undertone: "Listen to Son Gohan! What happened earlier at the waterfall meant nothing. Nothing at all. I let myself go. It was a stupid one , unconsidered situation. Mentally I wasn't in a good mood and you shamelessly exploited this just to mess with me, or as they call it with you .... I definitely don't have any feelings for you, understand ?! ?! .... In any case, I still want to train with you, because only you can help me to get stronger. Can you live with that? I mean, do you still want to train me? If not, you just have to tell me and I'll be gone. ", then she pulled her face back and waited for an answer.
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Gohan was more than disappointed. > How could she have worked something like that. I felt exactly that there was something that bound us together. ... I ... I am therefore only a means to reach a goal .... <"So what do you say, Son Gohan?" Elane asked again.Son Gohan got up and went to the door. There he stopped and turned back to Elane. “I have promised to help you, and a true sayajin never breaks his promise!” He added in his mind:> Yes, a sayajin never breaks his promise, never ... then why did you break your father? Why did you leave You promised to stay with me forever - and now, ... <then Son Gohan went up the stairs to his room. He was in grief, which one was greater? Was it greater sorrow because of his late father or because of Elane's dislike? ......
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Now Elane was sitting all alone in the kitchen> Oh damn! I didn't mean to hurt his feelings. ... But I don't have time to worry about my feelings about Gohan ... No, that doesn't work. I have a much more important job. Yes, I have to give Gohan the cold shoulder. That's the only way to do it! "Then she went up to her room too.
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When she got to her room, Hilda questioned her."What else did you have to talk to these boys? I thought everything was already cleared up?" "Oh Hilda! I just followed your instructions and made it clear to him that I don't want anything from him." It's better that way, you'll see! "" Yes, ... but ... Oh Hilda! I don't know either ... I don't know whether that was right. Whenever I'm around him, felt I feel very strange. I've never had such feelings for a boy. It's indescribable .... "" My beloved Elane. I can only advise you not to get too involved with these boys. He may be very nice, but at some point you will have to part with him. You understand my child. I mean it well with you. "" Oh Hilda! ", the two fell into each other's arms and Elane ran small tears down her cheeks. "Elane, I don't know how much this boy means to you now ... Good advice. Wait and see how everything develops. Who knows if he has such feelings for you too.Do you understand? ...- Maybe everything will turn out fine after all. "" Yes, you are right ... So and now, let's go to sleep too! Tomorrow is going to be a tough day! "
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And so the two went to sleep. Now all the lights in the house were out.
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TOG TOG TOG .... Elane is startled. Something is knocking on her window. TOG TOG TOG> What is it? I'm afraid. ... where is Hilda? <TOG TOG TOG: It's pitch dark. A bright flash of lightning illuminates the room, followed by a thunder that makes Elane flinch. > Oh no ... <TOG TOG "Who's there?"