The group Z and the angels - part 9 (who actually reads my FF?)
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So ....... finally it goes on ....... JAAAAA and I didn't get any commis again ...... but one from Paen777 I want to thank her, because she is the only one mine FF always reads and always a Come on me. Write !! THANK YOU Paen !!!
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I want to dedicate this part to her because she always writes me a come. I want to dedicate it to my girlfriend .... GalaxiGirl, she made me keep writing so quickly ....... (Your two FF are too highly recommended, you have to read them ...)
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I would come across a detailed one. Happy from you Paen, I would like to ask you to say your whole opinion about the whole FF, really everything !!!!
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Please to all who read my FF too (if there is anyone else at all ... ?????)
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Then please just write me your opinion and if it's the toughest criticism, I don't care, but it's really frustrating never to get more than 2 comments ..... * howl * * get a handkerchief *<br />
So ... stop the crying let's go ......
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Oh shit !!! I forgot something, I want to change my writing style a little ..... I add poems I have written myself ... * gg * my girlfriend (GalaxiGirl) thinks that I can write poems well ..... well, I'm curious as you like it !! .......
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Right at the beginning is a poem ..... that's what Trunks thinks about Clarisa .... just for information !!! * lol *
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And one more thing ... I wonder if it's the title why nobody reads my FF .....
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That's why I'm thinking of calling the story "3x unusual love" or "An unusual love x3" or just "an unusual love".
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How do you like that????
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Please write me your opinion
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Another info: with me you can stay in the space of spirit and time for 2 days, I'm not sure what it's like in the anime, I think 2 days, so 2 years!
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Another little explanation: Name> Thought <I write that when someone thinks something.<br />
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Finally: my email address: claudia.groulik@chello.at
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So ... but now everything is said ...
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--- Have fun ---
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[last sentences of part 8]
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She waited eagerly for the answers, especially those from Trunks. She had noticed very well that he was watching her.
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The reactions to come surprised her ...
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I fell in love with her.
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In their strength, their courage, in their determination
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but above all in their insecurity!
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Now i know
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I didn't want it to be true for a long time.
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I would so much like to dig into her feelings
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To see if she likes me!
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"I would really like to train your half-brother, if you agree, then it's ok! I think your idea is really great, if the others can't mind we do it that way ....
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what about you Trunks? "said Goku.
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"Yes, the idea is good.I would like to get stronger in sword fighting! We can do it that way, if you like! "
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"um ... yes ... well ..." Gohan stuttered around, he kept throwing nervous glances at Elane ...
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"Out with it my son ..."
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"Uh. Well, I would like to train with Elane, I'm interested in her new strength. I also think the plan is great!" Son Gohan gave Elane a quick look, when he noticed that she had also looked at him, he blushed. ..
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Zarbor also agreed and they created a training plan:
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Day 1 + Day 2: Clarisa and Trunks
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Day 3 + Day 4: Son Goku and Zarbor
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Day 5 + Day 6: Vegeta
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Day 7 + Day 8: Son Gohan
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Day 9 + Day 10: Clarisa and Trunks
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and then always the same order ...
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outside of the space of spirit and time:
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1st - 6th day: Gohan and Elane, train in the desert> then Gohan goes to the RvGuZ
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1st - 2nd day: Zarbor and Bridgenta> then Zarbor goes to the RvGuZ (room of spirit and Ziet)<br />
etc
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(hope that's understandable so .....)
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"So then everyone would be cleared up! Tomorrow we should relax today. How about we go swimming? Bulma can do that, can we use your pool?" Goku said and jumped up from his chair.
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"That's a good idea! Yes, of course we can go into the big pool, there shouldn't be any now!"
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"Can you actually swim?" Trunks asked the angels carefully.
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"Yes, of course, pretty good. Bridgenta, Elane, do you think you can swim with the now bigger wings?"
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"We can give it a try, right?" Bridgenta said to Elane.
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"Yes of course! Trying is better than studying!"
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So everyone went to get changed. A short time later they met outside the 33x10 pool! (I think that's really big * lol *)
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The deepest point was 3m60 deep and the shallowest point was 1m deep / shallow!<br />
Trunks immediately took a plunge into the cool water. Gohan followed suit.
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What no one noticed. Clarisa had in the meantime gone into the water as well. Swam now in the direction where the two half-Saiyajins jumped into the water. She used her wings to swim faster. So she was there in no time.
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In the next moment the two Saiyajins appeared, were able to take a breath just once, when both were again submerged by Clarisa. You only heard an attempted scream which then turned into bubbling.
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Everyone laughed and when the two reappeared they swam towards Clarisa, who was already trying to escape. Since she also used her wings she was a little faster, the lead also helped, but nevertheless the 2 Saiyajins managed to catch up with her, she was already in the shallow and could stand, but Son Gohan just took her and threw her short hand in the direction of the deep , there was Trunks again, who had crossed the pool in record time.He should watch Clarisa when she fell into the water and submerge again when she emerges.
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Clarisa flew through the air straight in the direction of Trunks, but she just laughed and suddenly stopped skilfully in the air. Their wings moved slightly. Gohan and Trunks cursed. Distracted by the whole situation, Trunks hadn't noticed Bulma and she was now pushing her son under the water, who quickly took his mother's ankle and pulled her down to him.
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Vegeta and Son Goku jumped in in the meantime too. When Goku put Vegeta under the water, Vegeta got mad, pushed him down and then Son pulled Goku Vegeta by the hand. They then fought a bitter fight underwater.
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When the two showed up, Bulma and Son Gohan were already there. Bulma went into hiding Vegeta and Gohan his father.
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Vegeta didn't swim to the surface straight away but "floated" around in the water for a while and came up with a plan.<br />
With full determination he dived under Bulma took her in his arms and flew into the air just above the deepest point. Bulma started screaming. She knew exactly what Vegeta was up to. But everyone else just laughed, because they could well imagine what was coming next.
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Vegeta was floating about five meters above the pool. Then he looked lovingly into Bulma's eyes, Bulma glared back angrily. Then Vegeta just grinned, said: "Bye my darling" and let go of Bulma. She screamed. And just before the surface of the water closed his eyes. She waited for the impact ......
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But that didn't come.
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Vegeta caught her again shortly before submerging. "Thanks vegeta. If you had done that I would never have repaired your GR again!" said Bulma menacingly.
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"Oh ... you have already said that several times, but never mind. I would never let you fall from this height .....!"
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"Thank you Vegeta ......" Bulma said affectionately and they kissed tenderly.<br />
What Bulma didn't notice ... During the kiss, Vegeta flew higher and higher to about 7m above the pool, soon they separated from each other.
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Then Vegeta just said with a grin: "Not from the previous height, that was too little, but from here I will let you fall, and this time I will certainly not catch you. Bye Bulma ..."
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And dropped Bulma again. This swore during the whole flight and in the end she screamed like a stick. Vegeta flew into the pool in a hurry. "Sat down on the floor, exactly at the point where Bulma was supposed to dive in, so that she doesn't hurt either. He counted ..... 5 ...... 4 ...... 3 ..... ..2 ...... 1 .. and the next moment she plunged into the cool water. Vegeta swam towards her, caught her and flew her out of the water, directly onto a lounger.
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Bulma gasped and coughed, Vegeta smiled and everyone else laughed. So she spent the last day before training. And it turned out to be an unforgettable day for everyone.
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So, I hope you enjoyed the part .......<br />
I also have to say goodbye .....
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Please also read my other FF ...... "Caught in the shoe of Manitu" and write me a come.
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To all who read my FF, write me an email (claudia.groulik@chello. At) or a come. So that I at least know how much my FF read. YOU'RE WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ok, that's what, ......
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Kiss to GalaxiGirl and Paen777.
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LG, everyone else
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Your Clarisa
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P.S.: Another poem of mine at the end, .... I like that so much, I thought I should write this down:
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What mine is yours
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what yours is mine
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Please, NEVER leave me alone!
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