Hello! Here is my first FF. I hope you like it. Could you guys write bide Komis? Because I need to know whether I write good or bad.
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It has been a long time since Buu was defeated. at that time, Vegeta and Goku saw each other very rarely. But now, on Goku's last visit, the two wanted to measure each other again. Since Vegeta still didn't get his fight. "Do you really think that's such a good idea !?" all said puzzled. "Woman," began Vegeta, "we have to compete, it's in our genes, wasn't it Kakarott?" he asked Goku "yes exactly and anyway, if a monster comes again we both have to know where we are with our strengths." Determined not to bother with anything or anyone, they have made a term. Exactly in a week.
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Vegeta is in his Gr room and trained at 30,000. In Ssj4 status. He's pretty happy with himself because he thinks Kakarott isn't ready yet."I'm probably as strong as him now. But that's not enough," he mumbles to himself while doing the 40,000 push-ups. "I am far from exhausted with my strength. I can still manage a lot." Determined Vegeta stands up and fires with kiballs. He also uses the Super-Gohst-Kamikatze-Attack quite calmly. Trunks watches his father enthusiastically, surprised and even a little proud. This notices him and gives him hints to disappear. "Let me train in peace, trunks and do something useful ok? Such as washing, ironing, cooking or practicing praying. I warn you! If you let Gohan or Goten defeat you, then I'll cut your pocket money! And now." get lost!" Vegeta growls annoyed. Grumpy, Trunks leaves the window to the Gr room and flies over to Goten. Vegeta goes on and destroys some combat robots.
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At the same moment, Goku, in the space of spirit and time, gets up from eating and gets ready to train.During his stretching exercises he ponders * How far Vegeta is with the training? He surely overtook me a long time ago ... I can't let that happen * with a smile at his egoism, he turns into an Ssj4 and starts with his punches and kicks. His red aura increases. His long black hair wafts in the light breeze. He looks at the mountain in front of him and points at him with his index finger. As with Freaser, it collects, but this time, black point. When it is intense enough, it fires it. Immediately the mountain explodes and Goku smiles quite satisfied.
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So the time goes by and the week goes by quickly. They both meet at God's Palace. "Well, Kakarott? Well learned? Would be disappointing if I beat you too easily!" he means with his, I'll kill you smile. Son Goku replies calmly "We want to see who loses here" Goku flies away without a word. Vegeta understands him and follows him with lightning speed.Somewhere in a deserted area, where no birds chirp and no streams flow, the two strongest warriors in the universe take up fighting positions.
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The silence seems to be stifling. The dried up hills and the cracks in the ground make the mood not exactly pleasant.
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