Hi this is my first FF, so please give me a lot of comments. I can take criticism. I also want to know if you like my writing style.
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And now have fun!
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° .. ° someone thinks
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".." someone speaks
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A New Hope Future Trunks in its time
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Part 1
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After Gohan defeated Cell, everyone flew to Dende's palace to find the dead
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to bring it back to life.
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Trunks woke up and looked around. He
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looked into Gohan's face, who was starting to grin. "What happened?" Asked
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Trunks. "You were killed by Cell, but
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Gohan defeated him! "said Kuririn
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(Krelin) "Wow! That's great!" Trunks was happy. But Gohan looked sadly at the ground. ° Father died of my pride! If I had defeated Cell the way he wanted, he would still be alive now! °
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The sky was black. And now Trunks saw the dragon Shenlong hovering over Dende's palace."One wish is still free!" said Shenlong. Yamch asked: "
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Can you bring Goku back to life? "
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"No, unfortunately that is not possible. He has already died twice!"
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Suddenly there was a sad mood in the forecourt of the palace! Everyone had hoped to see Goku again! "Shit! What do we do now?" asked Yamcha.
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Then everyone heard a voice speaking to their hearts. It was Goku!
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Goku: "Hello, Son Goku here! I am speaking to you from beyond. Listen to me!
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Bulma once said I pull bad guys
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downright on. And if you think about it right, that's actually true. I feel like it's better for the peace of the world when I'm not there. Master Kaio sees it that way too. I'm not angry about it either. Imagine I get
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a special bonus for saving the world! That is why I do not exist as a soul like everyone else, but I am allowed to keep my body. And the best thing is that it doesn't age because I'm already dead.Super what?
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Master Kaio is staying here, and there are people from the past. So it won't get boring .... Just tell Gohan and ChiChi how sorry I am that I'm no longer with them. But Gohan is stronger than me now. "" Is not true at all! "put in Gohan." So I have to break up! See you again in the afterlife!
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FAREWELL! "" SON-GOKUU !!! "shouted Kuririn.
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At that moment you saw a picture of Goku in the sky. "He's really happy!
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So no need to be sad! "Kuririn said then. At that moment he wasn't sure if he would ever see his best friend Goku again. Then he wished Shenlong that they would."
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The cyborg's self-destruct sequence was eliminated.
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Then Shenlong disappeared again and the sky became bright again.
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A few days later, Trunks was ready to go back to his time. He said goodbye to everyone and promised to visit again soon.<br />
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So that was the first part. I hope you enjoyed it. The next part is about trunks.
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Hope you write me a lot of comments.
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