it was about to explode or just break apart. Nobody would fly anywhere with this ship ... and even worse, nobody could survive such a crash safely, including him ...
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End of the 11th part
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Final remark:
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Actually, I didn't want to upload the next part so quickly, but your many comments convinced me.<br />
It makes me a little sad that despite all of your nice comments about my writing style, it doesn't seem good enough to get more people to read my other DBZ stories, the style of which is really no worse than this one.
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Still, thanks for all the encouragement. I will try to finish the last two chapters in the next three weeks, even if I have a lot of stress at work and little free time at the moment.