This is my first fF on Inuyasha. In retrospect, I don't think it's that good, I'm curious what you think of it.

The group was once again in Kaede's village to replenish their supplies and to recover from the rigors of the last fight. On this occasion, Kagome wanted to go home again, which of course immediately led to an argument with Inuyasha. "No you don't go! You're the only one who can see the splinters!" "Of course I go! I haven't been home for two weeks! And besides, I have to prepare for an important test for school! MAKE SPACE!" ! "- PATONG - and Inuyasha was already on the ground. Furious, Kagome trudged past him towards the well. "Does it always have to end in an argument when Kagome wants to get into her time for a few days, Inuyasha?" Miroku asked him, shaking his head. "Oh shut up!"
* What is he actually imagining! Who does he think he is !? Why can't he understand that I want to go home and have to study for school?* Deep in her thoughts, Kagome was on her way to the fountain when she stopped abruptly.
* I feel a splinter of the jewel! *
"So, all alone?" startled she turned around. A great demon stood in front of her. She could clearly see a splinter in his right shoulder. "Naraku ordered me to move you out of the way and bring him your splinters of the jewel. He said you were strong, although you are only human, that's why he gave me a splinter of the jewel of the four souls." * Naraku! This bastard can experience something! *
Kagome was about to grab her bow and shoot the splinter out of the youkai with one of her sacred arrows, when she noticed that she did not have her bow and arrows with her, she had left them in Kaede's hut in her anger.
"You don't want to fight back !? Then you are not as strong as Naraku had claimed. I don't care either. Say goodbye!" then she was hit hard.
"AHHHHH !!!"
"Did you hear that !?Somebody screamed ?! "asked Sango, startled." That was Kagome! She is in danger !! "As soon as he had said this, Inuyasha was already gone.
Kagome didn't know what happened to her, the blow the youkai had given her threw her right into a tree. She saw how he formed a ball of fire in his mouth and shot it at her. She lay dazed on the ground and was unable to evade. She shivered and closed her eyes.
Why did nothing happen? Did he miss me or what happened !?
Confused and afraid at the same time, the girl slowly opened her eyes.
"Inuyasha ?!"
The hanyou had thrown itself protectively in front of Kagome. He was hit directly by the fireball. He was badly injured and bleeding profusely. With the last of his strength he was able to destroy the youkai, after which he collapsed.
“INUYASHA !!” Kagome got up, ran to him and fell on his knees next to him. Tears ran down her face when she saw him so unconscious on the floor.She took his hand. * His hand is very cold ... oh no he won't ... *
"Kagome? What happened !?" Sango and Miroku ran towards them. "Are you all right?!"
“I'm doing reasonably well, but Inuyasha is badly injured.” He was immediately brought to Kaede.
"He mustn't die, he has to hold on." Kagome repeated the same words over and over again.
She waited with the others in front of Kaede's hut. "Don't worry, Kagome. He'll definitely make it." Sango tried to comfort her. "You know him, he's tough and doesn't give up easily." said Shippo. "What happened anyway? You wanted to go home, right?" now Miroku wanted to know from her. Kagome told them what had happened.
Then Kaede came out of the hut. "How ... how is he?" asked Kagome concerned. "I took care of his wounds as best I could. But this time they are really very bad and I don't know if he will manage it. What he needs most now is a lot of rest." said Kaede sternly."Can I see him?" she nodded. Kagome walked him the hut, sat down next to Inuyasha. "Inuyasha, I know you will make it ..." she whispered to herself rather to give herself a little hope.
In the next time she did not leave his side and took care of him. The same question haunted her mind all the time. *Just why? Why did he do that? How so!? *
After four days he finally came to. It was the middle of the night. Kagome was with him as always.
"Inuyasha !? I'm so happy !! How are you?"
"Kagome ... what ... what is pas ..." he didn't get any further, Kagome fell over his neck, overjoyed, and tears of relief and joy ran down her face. "I'm so sorry, Inuyasha ... I ... I am to blame for everything ... I'm just a burden for you and of no use ..." "What are you talking about, Kagome !?" horrified, he sat up. "That's all not true. If you were a burden for me and were of no use, would you still be here, would I have saved your life so often !?Kagome you are more important to me than anything else in the world ... even more important ... more important than ... than my own life ... I ... I love you. "Are you serious, but what about Kikyo !?" Kagome asked carefully, "I only love you, Kagome, I never really loved Kikyo, it was just gratitude and guilt that I felt towards her. "Kagome didn't really know whether she could believe him or not, since he had hurt and insulted her so often, but that intense and loving look in his gold-colored eyes made her forget all this, she believed him with all her heart.
Their faces came closer, slowly and tentatively their lips touched and melted into a beautiful, long and deep kiss.
"Inuyasha, I love you too." "Kagome, I promise you that I will never let you down or leave you alone."
Two days later, when Inuyasha's wounds had completely healed, they decided to go looking for Naraku again the next day.In the evening Kagome could not sleep and went for a walk. She went to the sacred tree where she saw Inuyasha.
"Can not you Sleep either?" Kagome asked and sat down next to him. "No, I somehow have the feeling that we will have to fight Naraku soon. Kagome, I beg you, hold back when the time comes, please as good as possible. You know how strong Naraku is and you don't want to, that something should happen to you. I could never forgive myself if something happened to you. "Kagome looked at him puzzled. * Is he really that worried about me ?! * She nodded. "I promise you."
The next day, they left. But they found no trace of Naraku, nor any of his traps or his descendants. They were in the forest near Kaede's village when Kagome suddenly stopped, startled. "What's the matter, Kagome?" Inuyasha asked. "I feel splinters ... it ... it's almost the whole gem!" "Naraku!" everyone shouted at the same time.They ran into the clearing in front of the forest where Kagome had located the splinters. Kagome and Shippo were hiding at the edge of the nearby forest.
There he stood in the middle of the clearing. Naraku!
"What do you want Naraku !?" Inuyasha screams angrily. "What! Your splinters of the jewel, of course. I've already collected a large part of the jewel. With your splinters, the jewel of the four souls would finally be complete again and I would have infinite power. So, give it to me!" did you think so! You will never get it !! " replied Inuyasha Naraku. "You asked for it!!" with these words Naraku attacked Inuyasha. Inuyasha was just able to fend him off with Tessaiga.
With that the fight was on. Everyone went into combat readiness, and Kagome kept her bow ready as a precaution. It was a quick but tough fight.
When Naraku was hit on the ground by Inuyasha, Miroku wanted to suck him into his black hole, when suddenly the Saimyosho, Naraku's poisonous insects, appeared and flew into Miroku's black hole.Stunned by the poison, he fell to the ground. Now Sango tried to finish Naraku with her boomerang. However, Naraku was able to stop him with ease and hurl him back to Sango, who was hit badly by him and remained unconscious on the ground.
Kagome could no longer see her friends go down one by one. She drew an arrow in her bow, stepped out of the forest and shot it at Naraku hab. Naraku was only pulled on the side, but still injured.
"I told you to stay out of it !!" Inuyasha shouted angrily.
Naraku shot a kind of energy ball at her. Kagome stood rigid with shock, she was much too fast that she could have avoided it. At the last moment, Inuyasha pushed her away.
As if in slow motion, the girl saw Inuyasha get hit and sink to the ground.
"No, Inuyasha !!" tears ran down her face.
“Naraku, you will pay for it !!” Kagome's voice was full of anger and hatred of Naraku."You want to threaten me !? Don't laugh, you are only human, even if you have magical powers!" "Stop it !!" she was boiling inside and clenching her fists. "You will pay here and now once and for all for all your crimes that you have committed !!"
During her last words, without her noticing, a pink glowing aura had formed around her.
She drew an arrow into her bow again, aimed at Naraku, and fired the arrow. The arrow shot at him with such speed and force that Naraku had no chance to evade and was hit. It dissolved into dust, leaving only the shards of jewels.
Kagome ran to Inuyasha, fell on his knees next to him, and took his hand. * She is freezing ... oh no, please don't ... he ... he mustn't ... * Kagome was close to tears, she didn't dare to think the thought through to the end.
Over and over again, she asked him to finally wake up again, to open his eyes, in vain.She couldn't, wouldn't believe it, and believe that he was dead. She burst into tears. "You promised never to leave me alone !!" she cried tearfully struggling with the Constitution. Sango and Miroku, who were doing reasonably well again, came to Kagome. "Kagome what happened !? Is he ..." Sango asked when she saw Kagome's tear-streaked face. Kagome looked at them both with a sad and sad look and only nodded silently. Sango hugged her friend. Kagome could not take a clear thought, the sadness overwhelmed her completely, her tears were just pouring down and she was only sobbing.
They had finally defeated Naraku and the jewel of the four souls was