Is my first anime poem, I would love to hear from clerks!

Anime Inuyasha

Kagome is not a baby
she's a big girl already.
Travels through a strange world
which she often likes.

Inuyasha likes to be stubborn,
is supposedly pure half-demon.
Is after shards of jewels
he would love to have more.

Many want splinters
but most of them are plagues.
Constantly endanger other life,
and are totally unruly.

So the journey continues
hopefully it will never fail.
Because then everything is lost
and what's left is worry.