So that's my first OneShoot, I hope I succeeded.
In the beginning there are Naru 17 and Hina 16 in the course of time there is Naru 18 and Hina 17 xD
just for info ^^ So let's go ^^ I hope you like it even if it's sad * cough * I didn't say anything ^^

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When the sun darkens.
Oneshoot NaruxHina

How long was it now? A year? two years? She didn't know anymore. She had lost track of time, even before that time. There was a knock on the door. "Come on to train! Or do you want to sit in the room all day and cry again?"
She didn't feel like training. The voice outside had also disappeared again. She felt alone, left behind, and helpless.

Why was she still alive = Could one still speak of life at all? Did SHE even live? In their view there was no point in living anymore. It was over for her. She got up and went to her closet.There she took out her kunais and the bag. She tied the bag with the kunais around her right leg and jumped out the window. She ran for a while, into the forest. Aie went to the lake, there she knelt in front of the water and took out her kunai. A while passed before she hugged the Kunai, first lightly, then more firmly.

The blood dripped into the white snow. What she didn't know was that a boy was sitting in the tree and looking on in shock.

The girl's eyes slowly went black, but she squeezed again. Shortly afterwards she dropped her kunai in the snow and she herself sank into the snow.

The boy couldn't believe what had just happened. He should have known what she was up to. He should have stopped her! In one jump he reached the girl in question. He looked at her. // How pretty she is .. // He quickly picked her up and ran to the 5th generation Hokage.

Her breath was shallow and slow.If you didn't take care of her quickly now, she would have to die and he had to prevent that! Why hadn't he stopped her? R could slap himself.

He arrived at Tsunade, he didn't knock, he just went in. "Tsunade!" he screamed. The woman startled. Who had disturbed her in her afternoon nap? She froze when she saw who was standing in front of her. "Y-d-you live?" the woman asked the shinobi. He looked up in despair. "Tsunade you have to help her! The girl is dying!" Tsunade looked at the seminal body. She almost took her breath away. "Hinata .." The shinobi got a stuck in his heart. Had he just heard that right? Should that be Hinata ?.
His chest tightened. “Come on, put them on the floor!” Tsunade was talking frantically. But the shinobi obeyed and laid Hinata gently on the floor, careful not to hurt her. She seemed so fragile. "Please get a bandage from the back of my closet!" Tsunade called to him. He nodded and left.Tsunade put her hands on Hinata's body and began to heal her. A green light enveloped her hands. Tsunade noticed that Hinata had internal injuries. Which probably came from too much training. "Naruto hurry up at last!" This startled and ran quickly with the bandage back to Tsunade. "Try to stop your bleeding!" ordered Tsunade. Naruto first dabbed the blood away with a cloth, then bandaged the wound. Tsunade had meanwhile finished and turned to the other wound.

"Tell me what happened! Did you fight? Did you hurt her?" Naruto glared at tsunade. "I would never do that!" "Then what was it?" she asked, slightly annoyed. "Suicide .." he mumbled. Tsunade startled. Hinata and suicide? It didn't go together. It was like when a bird and an elephant wanted to mate. "I beg your pardon?" Tsunade asked. Naruto reported what he had seen. "She owes us a statement later!" Tsunade said spontaneously."I'm done .. She needs rest now .." "That means she can do it" asked Naruto. "If she wants it now then yes ..." she muttered. "Put her in one of the beds and lie down a little too. But stay close to her so that she is not alone when she wakes up. Who knows what else she will do when she realizes that she is still alive." Naruto nodded and took Hinata on the arm and left.

When he got to a room, he carefully put Hinata into bed. Then he lay down in the next bed, which he had previously pushed closer to Hinata. He looked at her for a while before falling asleep.

During the night she woke up, her wrist hurt terribly and when she tried to move she winced, pressed her lips together to prevent such a scream. Was she dead? No, probably not. Slowly she opened her eyes. The hospital.
Who do you think brought them here?
Who had seen or found them?
And especially why did he do that?She wanted to die. She couldn't imagine a life without him. Why did he leave her alone? Had he never noticed how much she loved him, how much she needed him? She noticed how someone moved next to her. Carefully and slowly, she turned her head to one side. Her eyes widened when she saw who was lying there. That was a dream! Just a dream. The pain in her arm reported itself again and indicated that this was not a dream. "Naruto-kun .." Hinata whispered weakly.

It seemed to Naruto as if someone was calling for him and before he knew it he looked into two purple eyes. His heart tightened at the sight of her. He saw how much she suffered. Silence. Both looked at each other and were silent. Until Naruto broke the silence. "What was it all about? Why did you want to kill yourself?" she continued to be silent. Her gaze went into emptiness. "Hinata?" asked naruto. "Hinata!" he yelled when she still didn't move. He grabbed her shoulder. Nothing.He tried to feel her pulse. Nothing. She was dead. Naruto got tears in his eyes. "Shit! I just wanted to tell you how much I .. I .. I love you Hinata-chan!"

"I love you Hinata-chan!"
Hinata couldn't believe her ears. Then she saw individual tears running down his face. //Naruto..// "Please don't die! I need you! Stay with me!" he then screamed and sat bolt upright in bed. Even Hinata was startled by this scream and sat on the bed.

Naruto looked at Hinata. // No .. She's dead. // He's telling himself. "I love you .." he muttered. Hinata couldn't believe it. "N-n Naruto?" she asked. His eyes widened. "You live!" he called and hugged her. "Ouch .. Naruto .. be careful .." she muttered. "and yes I live .. and you too .."
He looked at her. "Everyone said you were .. dead!" "No, I'm alive .." he then grinned. "Naruto?" "Hm?" "Did you mean that seriously with .." but she was silent. Naruto had put a finger to her lips."Yes Hinata, I finally got it .." he grinned and she smiled sheepishly. After that they got closer and Naruto gently put his lips on hers. They both closed their eyes and Hinata kissed back.

~ One week later ~

Hinata was discharged from the hospital and was happier than ever. She and Naruto had been together for a week and it was spreading like fire in Konoha. Naruto was picking up Hinata from the hospital. "I already have something planned for today, I hope you have nothing in mind!" he grinned. "No, n-not yet .." at this grin she became a bit insecure .. He was planning something crazy .. But she noticed his mischievous grin. "Well then come on!" he took her by the hand and pulled her home with him.

Once there, he unlocked the door. He brought her into the bedroom. Everything there was full of roses. "Today is Hinata-chan's birthday .." She entered the room and Naruto followed her. He locked the lock behind him and grinned."N-Naruto .." "Shhht .." he made and walked towards her. Then he kissed her gently. She returned the kiss. Something was stirring in her. Why did she feel this longing for him right now? He put his hands on her hips. He gently stroked her sides. He took a few steps backwards and pulled her with him. Shortly before the bed he turned her over and let her slide gently onto the bed. They broke up for a few minutes, but only to keep the kiss fiery.

His hands slowly went under her T-shirt and gently brushed it upwards. Hinata turned red around the tip of her nose. Her hands buried in his hair. For a small millisecond he separated from her and took off her shirt completely. Naruto had to grin slightly. He'd never felt like this with anyone before. Not even with Sakura. Maybe he had never really loved Sakura?
Or wasn't that love after all? This feeling what he had. Was it something else? No, he didn't want to tell himself that.He gently ran a finger over her stomach. Hinata shuddered at his touch, but quickly regained control and enjoyed it. Slowly, almost as if in slow motion, she let her hands slide to his shirt. Carefully she pulled it up and finally over his head and dropped it on the floor. Now she put a hand on his stomach and felt his heartbeat. He was faster and now and then more irregular than usual. Was he that excited?

Naruto slowly lowered his hand, still resting on her stomach. When he got to her pants, he unbuttoned them. Now he let go of her completely for a moment and slipped off her pants. Then he kissed her belly gently. Hinata gave a small gasp. The feeling she just had was indescribable. Naruto walked slowly upstairs. Up to her neck. His hands went up, too. Until he got to her bra. Carefully he lifted it and tried to open the latch.(Tjahaaa that won't work ... * nasty grin *)
At first, Hinata didn't know what to do. But slowly she straightened up and helped him a little. After another short time, it was open. Hinata's hands slid down. Meanwhile, she looked Naruto in the eye. He smiled slightly. Slowly she undid the button on his pants. Naruto made it easier for her, he got up briefly and took off his pants. Now both sat there in their underwear. Naruto had to grin slightly, Hinata just blushed. Naruto came back to her on the bed. Hinata was lying on the bed again with a slight whoosh and Naruto kissed her neck again, while he stripped off her bra. His hands slide deeper to her panties and gently pulled them down on her. Hinata promptly blushed. Naruto grinned and pulled off his boxer shorts. Hinata narrowed her eyes